About Sci-Fi Paragraph Rewriter
Science fiction paragraphs rot in two ways: jargon fog, or tourism. This locked Science Fiction rewriter keeps your constraints and terms of art, and offers clearer or more sensory versions — without inventing a drive that deletes the problem.
How to use it
- Paste the paragraph; list terms that must stay (delta-v, hull 4, light-delay).
- Choose clearer if you over-explained; atmospheric if the station is a gray box.
- Reject any option that adds a device that solves the scene.
- Keep numbers if they were load-bearing.
Examples
Input
Goal: clearer · A depressurization checklist buried in metaphor.
What you get
Readable steps, fear still in the last clause.
Input
Goal: atmospheric · She walks the spoke. Spin gravity.
What you get
Inner-ear and light, no new alien mural.
Input
Goal: tighter · A character explains climate policy to another expert.
What you get
Subtext and one number; experts do not lecture each other like this.
Rewrites that respect the physics
Terms of art stay
If you wrote “specific impulse,” do not let the option become “space gas.”
No free upgrades
A clearer paragraph is not allowed to add a better engine.
Sense of wonder is a seasoning
Atmospheric should not open a viewport onto a new plot.
Avoid
- Technobabble inflation.
- Modern Earth memes in a far-future voice unless that is the bit.